JellyPie73's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[COTM [May-LVL99]: Frisk/Chara]

Why exactly does Frisk turn into Chara? They are two different people and when Frisk gets a lot of LOVE they stay Frisk. At the end of the genocide run, frisk actually MEETS Chara and they are different people.

[Side by Side]

This is great! The linework is very neat on both of the sides and the contrast is ascetically pleasing. Though perhaps you could add some shading on the actual characters as well as on the ground. Also, the fingers of the digital girl look a bit unnatural, looking at references such as your own fingers or pictures on the internet could help.

TrisNGar responds:

Thank you for your thoughts

[B-Tradigital]

This is overall quite good although the coloring needs some work. Perhaps if you do now use a marker to color and instead use a pencil it might look a lot cleaner. Also, may I ask what has this to do with the theme "Tradigital"?